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Main Body 1
In Egypt and Saudi Arabia, only under 10% of overall water is used for domestic use (8% for Egypt and 6% for Saudi Arabia). A tenth of water is involved in industrial processes, while the same field in Arabia A three times more water. Furthermore, the enormous portion of overall 1 of it is A for agriculture in Egypt, at 82%, and the same for Saudi Arabia, at 64%.
Repeated words
- Data consistent
- Linking words not overused
- Information grouped
- Actual comparison
- No opinions
Main Body 2
Canada's (20%) water utilization for household tasks is 1 in New Zealand (10%). The other part of overall water use in New Zealand was almost equal for 2, at 46% and 44%, respectively. In Canada, water supplied for industry made up 70%, whereas for agriculture it was spent only 8%.
- Data consistent
- Linking words not overused
- Information grouped
- Actual comparison
- Clear comparison
- No opinions
- No explanations
- Accurate degree words
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